Enough of My Loss

I have failed in a lot of duties,
Which I should have fulfilled,
Easily enough.

I have done some mistakes,
Which I shouldn’t have,
Smartly enough.

I have lost in a lot of battles,
Even fled not fought in some,
Bravely enough.

I have experienced a lot,
I could learn way too more,
Quickly enough.

I look around for friends,
I could’ve not lost them,
Nicely enough.

And here I am complaining,
Not getting a thing at all,
I’m not striving enough.

17 Comments Add yours

  1. Very well-written poem, Rejoy! Cut yourself some slack! Remember that we all make mistakes and learn from them. ❤ Enjoy the rest of your weekend! Cheryl

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks for the good advice!! Lots of good wishes for you

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Nawazish says:

    Very well written! We should cut ourselves some slack! We cannot win everytime. What matters is we tried

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Yup. Some time off is great!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. 💖That was a great poem!

    Liked by 4 people

  4. Silver Stone says:

    Well written poem! Love the message behind it, by the way

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks for understanding the message.

      Like

  5. Every one makes mistakes, the main thing is to get up after and correct them, I love the message and you expressed it beautifully!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. jess333reads says:

    Its beautiful….Its like giving voices to hidden regrets..

    Liked by 2 people

  7. thesupermode says:

    This is absolutely incredible, possibly the most profound poem I’ve read in recent times. The way I interpret this masterpiece is you’ve spelt out your regrets in each stanza but ended it in a manner which shows that you did your best in each case.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Oh wow! You understood it. I’m glad. Lots of good wishes. Thanks a million.

      Liked by 2 people

  8. That is very well penned..🙂👌

    Liked by 2 people

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