After some good advice from my beloved reader friends, I will be trying another Haiku today. Feel free to correct me, no problems! I am a 15 year old after all!!
I have many books, Yet the Knowledge I have less, THEY try to “Teach” me.
Thank you so much. I am glad I could improve my Haiku in one day! 😊 All thanks to the support and immense love you shower on my little corner of the internet! 😊
😂😂 Not being a Karen but I think you should not use the starting phrase with just anyone. Thanks for the compliment. Sorry for the previous statement used. 🙏
To be honest just because we’re Indians doesn’t mean we can use vernacular language here on a noted platform like WordPress. Just a suggestion, I am sorry.
lololol!
just a question, though. i’ve stumbled across a buncha blogs which are not in English. some are Swedish, some are German, some are Spanish… so, would that mean that thos blogs shouldn’t be using their vernacular languages? or is it just a thing against Hindi and other Indian slang?
just a thought. food for the brain!
don’t mean to offend. i’m only posing a question.
You got confused between vernacular and regional language, 😉 Even I love CarryMinati and his godly slangs 😂 According to the God of Slangs, Slangs are great! I use even more dangerous slangs with friends 😈 But the thing is that we should not use them just with Any and Every One, like virtual buddies, teachers, and elders! 😉
I think you’re older than me and will understand 🙏
Teenage 
You left me speechless(in a good way), you write marvelously for a 15 year old!
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Thank you so much. I am glad I could improve my Haiku in one day! 😊 All thanks to the support and immense love you shower on my little corner of the internet! 😊
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😁
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All thanks to your motivation,😊
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Amazing!
You are a brilliant poet for sure!
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Thank you so much Ishaan! I guess this Haiku is in accordance with the 5 7 5 rule. 🤣
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😂 I usually just use a syllable counting site for writing haikus. Counting them mentally gets tedious.
Well done sir!👍👏
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I prefer organic human labour. The idea of this Haiku came to me when I was studying Physics. Syllabus are not a hard and fast rule though.
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Rejoy, you are a “quick study!” Very well done! 🙂 Take care. Cheryl
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Thank you so much Cheryl! Wouldn’t have been possible without you telling me. You are a true friend ❤️
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Well done, you!
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Thank you so very much 😊
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You write so wonderfully, I see much potential in you 😊
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Thank you so much. I feel motivated! 🙏😊💛
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It’s a pleasure 💕✨
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You’re very kind 😄💛
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As are you, my friend 🤗🦋
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Glad for the compliment 💛
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😊😊✨
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New Haiku out Do check it out. I am almost on a Haiku spree!!
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Well done! A very insightful haiku 😊
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Thanks a lot. Your comment means a lot. 🙏
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ooooh, sliiick!
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What is that supposed to mean? 😂
I had said I don’t know about that language 😂😂
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abbey yaar…
slick is a compliment, meaning like… ugh, i’m not sure how to explain!
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😂😂 Not being a Karen but I think you should not use the starting phrase with just anyone. Thanks for the compliment. Sorry for the previous statement used. 🙏
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haan haan, i thought you were Indian so i hoped you wouldn’t mind… xD!
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To be honest just because we’re Indians doesn’t mean we can use vernacular language here on a noted platform like WordPress. Just a suggestion, I am sorry.
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hmmm, point. sorry if i offended you!
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Not at all. I don’t get offended. I am not a Karen😂😂
Just a little suggestion which only an Indian can give😉
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lololol!
just a question, though. i’ve stumbled across a buncha blogs which are not in English. some are Swedish, some are German, some are Spanish… so, would that mean that thos blogs shouldn’t be using their vernacular languages? or is it just a thing against Hindi and other Indian slang?
just a thought. food for the brain!
don’t mean to offend. i’m only posing a question.
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You got confused between vernacular and regional language, 😉 Even I love CarryMinati and his godly slangs 😂 According to the God of Slangs, Slangs are great! I use even more dangerous slangs with friends 😈 But the thing is that we should not use them just with Any and Every One, like virtual buddies, teachers, and elders! 😉
I think you’re older than me and will understand 🙏
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nahi, i am younger than you.
yup, i think i got confused. wrote that in a hurry, sorry…
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I think you’re a college student, aren’t ya? 😂
No problem, This platform helps you grow! No hard feelings ☺️👍 Now let’s not make it a sermon😂😬😜
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noooo, not college!
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Then University?
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no, i’m in school!!! lolololol
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Ok. 😂
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amazing work
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Thanks a lot!! I am new to this form of art, but glad you liked my novice work 😅
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Great job! Keep it up
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Thanks a million for your support
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You are so very welcome!
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Keep visiting!
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This is really well written!
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Thank you so very much for your support ❤️
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