Knowledge Haiku #2

After some good advice from my beloved reader friends, I will be trying another Haiku today. Feel free to correct me, no problems! I am a 15 year old after all!!

I have many books,
Yet the Knowledge I have less,
THEY try to “Teach” me.

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  1. You left me speechless(in a good way), you write marvelously for a 15 year old!

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much. I am glad I could improve my Haiku in one day! 😊 All thanks to the support and immense love you shower on my little corner of the internet! 😊

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          All thanks to your motivation,😊

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  2. Amazing!
    You are a brilliant poet for sure!

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much Ishaan! I guess this Haiku is in accordance with the 5 7 5 rule. 🀣

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      1. πŸ˜‚ I usually just use a syllable counting site for writing haikus. Counting them mentally gets tedious.
        Well done sir!πŸ‘πŸ‘

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          I prefer organic human labour. The idea of this Haiku came to me when I was studying Physics. Syllabus are not a hard and fast rule though.

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  3. Rejoy, you are a “quick study!” Very well done! πŸ™‚ Take care. Cheryl

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much Cheryl! Wouldn’t have been possible without you telling me. You are a true friend ❀️

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so very much 😊

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  4. You write so wonderfully, I see much potential in you 😊

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much. I feel motivated! πŸ™πŸ˜ŠπŸ’›

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      1. It’s a pleasure πŸ’•βœ¨

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          You’re very kind πŸ˜„πŸ’›

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          1. As are you, my friend πŸ€—πŸ¦‹

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            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              Glad for the compliment πŸ’›

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              1. 😊😊✨

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                1. Rejoy Dey says:

                  New Haiku out Do check it out. I am almost on a Haiku spree!!

                  Like

  5. Hilary Tan says:

    Well done! A very insightful haiku 😊

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks a lot. Your comment means a lot. πŸ™

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      What is that supposed to mean? πŸ˜‚
      I had said I don’t know about that language πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      1. abbey yaar…
        slick is a compliment, meaning like… ugh, i’m not sure how to explain!

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Not being a Karen but I think you should not use the starting phrase with just anyone. Thanks for the compliment. Sorry for the previous statement used. πŸ™

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          1. haan haan, i thought you were Indian so i hoped you wouldn’t mind… xD!

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            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              To be honest just because we’re Indians doesn’t mean we can use vernacular language here on a noted platform like WordPress. Just a suggestion, I am sorry.

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              1. hmmm, point. sorry if i offended you!

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                1. Rejoy Dey says:

                  Not at all. I don’t get offended. I am not a KarenπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
                  Just a little suggestion which only an Indian can giveπŸ˜‰

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                  1. lololol!
                    just a question, though. i’ve stumbled across a buncha blogs which are not in English. some are Swedish, some are German, some are Spanish… so, would that mean that thos blogs shouldn’t be using their vernacular languages? or is it just a thing against Hindi and other Indian slang?
                    just a thought. food for the brain!
                    don’t mean to offend. i’m only posing a question.

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                    1. Rejoy Dey says:

                      You got confused between vernacular and regional language, πŸ˜‰ Even I love CarryMinati and his godly slangs πŸ˜‚ According to the God of Slangs, Slangs are great! I use even more dangerous slangs with friends 😈 But the thing is that we should not use them just with Any and Every One, like virtual buddies, teachers, and elders! πŸ˜‰
                      I think you’re older than me and will understand πŸ™

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                    2. nahi, i am younger than you.
                      yup, i think i got confused. wrote that in a hurry, sorry…

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                    3. Rejoy Dey says:

                      I think you’re a college student, aren’t ya? πŸ˜‚
                      No problem, This platform helps you grow! No hard feelings β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘ Now let’s not make it a sermonπŸ˜‚πŸ˜¬πŸ˜œ

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                    4. Rejoy Dey says:

                      Then University?

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                    5. no, i’m in school!!! lolololol

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks a lot!! I am new to this form of art, but glad you liked my novice work πŸ˜…

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  6. Beck says:

    Great job! Keep it up

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks a million for your support

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      1. Beck says:

        You are so very welcome!

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  7. This is really well written!

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so very much for your support ❀️

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