This is my first Haiku. I have never tried it in my life. I think it is a cool way to express the small verses which are too pretty too forget and too small and independent to be merged into other poems. Do comment about how the haiku is!🙏
Here I am, about to live,
The urge wants to die, not me.
Here I Am Haiku#1
Teenage 
Amazingly written, but maybe a comma after wants to die🤔
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Thanks. I will correct it. 🙏
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😁I didn’t mean to be rude
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No worries 👍
Mom called for dinner. Made a hurried post. Didn’t check anything and damn carelessness does it all.
You’re a life saver 👊🏻👊🏼👊👊🏽👊🏿👊🏾
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🙂
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☺️😄
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Beautifully penned work! 😊🌷
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It was my first try. Glad you liked!
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Thanks! 👼
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Rejoy, I like this poem very much! Technically, it is not a haiku.
A haiku has 3 lines:
Line one-five syllables
Line two-seven syllables
Line three-five syllables
I hope this is helpful. Post another haiku. I think you’ll be great!
All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you so much. I didn’t know much about it but yet I gave it a try ☺️
You’re very kind 😊🙏
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Amazing! This is wonderful.
As someone else mentioned, haikus technically have three lines with 5-7-5 syllables. However many of the famous haikus don’t follow this rule, so maybe it doesn’t really matter.
You should definitely write more Haikus!
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Sincere gratitude for the motivation 🙏
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An excellent attempt at a not so easy poetic form! Thanks for passing by and liking and following my blog! I’m delighted to like and follow your blog site also! 😊🙏💛👊🎉
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Lots of thanks to you for your help and support 🙏❤️
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I did not help you at all bro! Glad to support by following your blog! 😊🙏💛👊🎉
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One comment is enough to help me to know that my blog is being read and motivates me to write more!
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I’m happy to do that bro – no problem at all! Keep up the good work! 😊🙏💛👊🎉
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Keep supporting
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Of course bro! 😊🙏💛👊🎉
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The support from my readers keeps my little blog running!
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Absolutely! Keep up your good work!
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Lots of love
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My first Haiku lives
Still in my heart forever
Keep it up, young man.
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Thank you so much Doc. Meanwhile I have also written a second one! 😊
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