Here I Am Haiku#1

This is my first Haiku. I have never tried it in my life. I think it is a cool way to express the small verses which are too pretty too forget and too small and independent to be merged into other poems. Do comment about how the haiku is!πŸ™


Here I am, about to live,
The urge wants to die, not me.

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  1. Amazingly written, but maybe a comma after wants to dieπŸ€”

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks. I will correct it. πŸ™

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      1. 😁I didn’t mean to be rude

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          No worries πŸ‘
          Mom called for dinner. Made a hurried post. Didn’t check anything and damn carelessness does it all.
          You’re a life saver πŸ‘ŠπŸ»πŸ‘ŠπŸΌπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ½πŸ‘ŠπŸΏπŸ‘ŠπŸΎ

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            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜„

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  2. Beautifully penned work! 😊🌷

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      It was my first try. Glad you liked!

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  3. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

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  4. Rejoy, I like this poem very much! Technically, it is not a haiku.

    A haiku has 3 lines:

    Line one-five syllables
    Line two-seven syllables
    Line three-five syllables

    I hope this is helpful. Post another haiku. I think you’ll be great!

    All the best! Cheryl

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much. I didn’t know much about it but yet I gave it a try ☺️
      You’re very kind πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  5. Amazing! This is wonderful.
    As someone else mentioned, haikus technically have three lines with 5-7-5 syllables. However many of the famous haikus don’t follow this rule, so maybe it doesn’t really matter.
    You should definitely write more Haikus!

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Sincere gratitude for the motivation πŸ™

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  6. darellphilip says:

    An excellent attempt at a not so easy poetic form! Thanks for passing by and liking and following my blog! I’m delighted to like and follow your blog site also! πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ’›πŸ‘ŠπŸŽ‰

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Lots of thanks to you for your help and support πŸ™β€οΈ

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      1. darellphilip says:

        I did not help you at all bro! Glad to support by following your blog! πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ’›πŸ‘ŠπŸŽ‰

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          One comment is enough to help me to know that my blog is being read and motivates me to write more!

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          1. darellphilip says:

            I’m happy to do that bro – no problem at all! Keep up the good work! πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ’›πŸ‘ŠπŸŽ‰

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              1. darellphilip says:

                Of course bro! πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ’›πŸ‘ŠπŸŽ‰

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                1. Rejoy Dey says:

                  The support from my readers keeps my little blog running!

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                  1. darellphilip says:

                    Absolutely! Keep up your good work!

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  7. theholodoc says:

    My first Haiku lives
    Still in my heart forever
    Keep it up, young man.

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thank you so much Doc. Meanwhile I have also written a second one! 😊

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