The Reply (Which I Never Got)

At times I see those texts,

Not always, but yes I do.

Those dead words,

Which I wrote,

The words, my best,

Which never could truly,

Fulfill their job.

The messages which,

I passed on to you,

The ones I loved to admire,

They never became beautiful,

Without your beautiful glance.

I stay late at night.

Hope in my eyes,

Instead of sleep,

I think about you.

Alas!

You don’t even think about,

My creations,

Leave aside me.

But yes, I remind myself this,

I am human enough to wait,

To not end the words,

Without a full stop,

I put a semicolon,

Alas!

You only see the dot.

51 Comments Add yours

  1. Dulcy Singh says:

    Very beautifully written πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      When knife strikes your heart, blood comes out. When pain strikes your heart poems gush out. Thank you so much for your kind words. πŸ˜‡

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      1. Dulcy Singh says:

        I can relate it …

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          We all hide pain behind our smiles and kiss our doom goodnight everytime we think deeply, ain’t it? 😟

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          1. Dulcy Singh says:

            Yep πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

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            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              And then grief breathes upon us it’s hateful air to make us father apart.

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      2. Well said πŸ‘πŸ‘

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          Thank you so much.

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  2. The end was amazing Joy!❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      But alas the end of my story wasn’t amazing. 😟
      Thank you so much for your support Sis. βœ¨πŸ™πŸ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Oh, I’m sorry about it…πŸ₯Ί
        You expressed it so well! I hope she replies! And is this your story?🧐

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          Yes, it’s my story. Don’t be sorry! Everything happens for good.You said my poem was amazing, if my story weren’t painful, the poem would have never been written by me! So, yup! I’m smiling.

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          1. I appreciate your perspective.πŸ‘πŸ»

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            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              Thanks a lot and sorry for the late reply πŸ™

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              1. No issues Joy!
                Better late than never. πŸ™‚πŸ™ƒ

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                1. Rejoy Dey says:

                  Late Reply. That’s all my poem was about! I became the villain of my own story 😭

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                  1. If late reply is not intentional it’s no wrong Joy.

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                    1. Rejoy Dey says:

                      Miscommunication ruins everything. Don’t ask how I know.

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                    2. I agree that…😌
                      No worries, no more questions!πŸ˜…
                      I already spammed your comment section!

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                    3. Rejoy Dey says:

                      Trust me. The long comment section has made my blog the top blog in terms of Teenage Content across WordPress. I am happy. Thanks a lot for making my comment section long. After years when I will read these I shall remember How I grew up. No worries. Let’s get this conversation longer!

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                    4. I’m happy for you, Joy! Keep growing!

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                    5. Rejoy Dey says:

                      Thanks. You are the ones who help me grow! πŸ™πŸ˜„

                      Liked by 1 person

  3. Cookie Girl says:

    Boi, that is AWESOME!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks
      The secret ingredient is pain.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Cookie Girl says:

        Mhmm
        Wait what? You’ve lived this?

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          Yup! We all have those messages to which we expect a reply, but they never come, don’t we? Thanks for stopping by!

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  4. I love the sense of mystery that comes with this poem, it’s very gripping and had me reading from start to finish ✨🌷

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      When you don’t get a reply, mystery is all that prevails, misunderstanding, you betcha.
      Thank you so much for your motivating comment. Glad my poem was gripping.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. For sure, a lot of overthinking! Thank you for sharing 😊🌷

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  5. Silver Stone says:

    This was just amazing and well penned! (even though it has a sad theme)

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Thanks for your motivation. Boosted my mood 😊

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Silver Stone says:

        You’re most welcome! πŸ˜„

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        1. Rejoy Dey says:

          Your support matters a lot πŸ’―

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  6. Keep on writing, Rejoy. Thanks for the follow πŸ™‚

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    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      It’s my duty as a blogger to spread the love! thanks for your support, Spread the Love!!

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Beautiful poem! Reminds me of when I’m thinking of the perfect reply to a WhatsApp message.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Glad you liked it! There context is absolutely similar. I am very happy that you could see a similarity of this poem with your life. 😊😊

      Like

            1. Rejoy Dey says:

              Thanks for all this motivation!!

              Like

              1. You’re very welcome Rejoy!

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                1. Rejoy Dey says:

                  Your blog is pretty Amazing 😍

                  Like

                    1. Rejoy Dey says:

                      You’re welcome

                      Liked by 1 person

  8. darellphilip says:

    Your quite a good little poet aren’t ya? πŸ˜‚ Keep shining bro! πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ’›πŸ‘ŠπŸŽ‰

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  9. Garima says:

    Brilliantly penned! πŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      Sincere gratitude

      Like

  10. This is nice! and very creative

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rejoy Dey says:

      I glad that you liked it 😊

      Liked by 1 person

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